you are a little bit happier than i am reviewed

someone named dan feder reviewed the book

the poem he cites as mundane is about death

some of my happiest moments in life occur on AOL instant messager

i will create a new category
on my instant messager buddy list

i will call it
'people i like who don't like me back'

and i will move your screen name into that group
and i will invite you over to my house and show you

and you will say, 'if i didn't like you why did i come over'
and you will look at my face
and i will have an honest answer for your question
i will tell you that you came over to be polite

and after a while you will go home
and you won't call
and i won't either
and after a while i won't like you anymore
and after a while we'll forget each other
and after a while you will be beautiful and alone inside of your coffin
and i’ll be cold and alone inside of my coffin

the review says i am more resigned than probing and i am incurious

it says i have anxiety about modern life which i do not feel is true; i feel i have anxiety about death, the nature of being and existence, the arbitrary nature of the universe, limited-time, and other things that exist because of life, not modern life

i will respond to all reviews on this site, for some reason